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Best Newspaper
Community Colleges


Winner: The Metropolis, Miami-Dade CCWolfson
Runner-Up: The Observer, Broward CC
Honorable Mention: In Motion, Daytona Beach CC

Winner
The Metropolis
Miami-Dade CCWolfson
The Metropolis at Miami-Dade Community College-Wolfson had taken a leave of absence from Florida Leader’s newspaper competition. But with some traditionally strong community college papers such as The Valencia Source at Valencia Community College and The Scribe at Seminole Community College having an off year, partly because of the recent loss of established advisors, the door was wide open for The Metropolis to step back into the limelight. With a new look and a new dedication to excellence, this twice-monthly publication has earned Florida Leader’s top spot. “The quality of the paper has increased tremendously,” says Madeline Pumariega, dean of students. “There’s a new focus on news, information, and special features.”

Although The Metropolis is the only official campus paper, the Miami area has a myriad of free publications all vying for the limited attention of a busy student populace. To compete, The Metropolis decided it needed some “curb appeal” and promptly gave itself a facelift. The process was simple: take their non-standard broadsheet and fold it in half. The result is a cohesive blend of newspaper credibility with magazine funk. Picking up the paper, you first notice the tabloid-sized front cover with its post-modern illustrations and provocative teasers giving it a South Beach magazine feel. Upon opening the paper to its full height, you’re surprised by its contemporary newspaper look—modular design, an elegant nameplate, and large, colorful photos. “I told the staff that what they were doing was getting away from traditional newspaper format but that they might be right as far as a marketing and attractiveness aspect,” says Art Brockway, first-year advisor. “They were 100-percent right. Right now, our racks are empty. Students are picking it up.”

Along with the new look, The Metropolis also changed the way it approaches news. “Students have a limited amount of time in their schedules,” says Aldo Nahed, editor in chief. “They’re on the go; many have jobs, classes, and family to juggle. The way our paper fills the needs of students is by informing them of all the changes occurring on campus and in the community in a brief yet effectively informative manner.”

The Metropolis’s center spread features “Forum,” the paper’s best section. With a clean design and student-focused editorials, Forum is the voice of M-DCC-Wolfson’s student body. “Our paper is direct, diverse, and holds its opinion pages to students’ concerns,” Brockway says. “People are responding to our articles, which indicates that our words are reaching our audience.”

The paper’s changes may have improved the overall product, but they have also caused some problems. Because of the new focus on short, to-the-point articles, The Metropolis is missing any in-depth feature articles—the bread and butter of all journalism. The staff could improve the paper by taking larger issues and localizing them to connect with the student body on a more personal level. Also, the new cover doesn’t always give enough information about what’s included in the issue. However, The Metropolis has taken a giant leap forward over previous years. “People constantly comment on our articles and look, which lets us know that we’re doing the right thing,” Nahed says.

Contact Pumariega at mpumarie@mdcc.edu,
Brockway at abrockwa@mdcc.edu,
Nahed at anahed_metropolis@hotmail.com, or visit www.mdcc.edu/wolfson/metropolis.

Tips for Improvement—The Metropolis

  1. Lengthen articlesYour goal to present information in a quick manner is commendable, but don’t forget about the in-depth articles—they’ll bring back your readers more consistently than anything else.
  2. Don’t forget about text on your coverYour magazine cover still should promo the articles in the paper.
  3. Remain consistentYour spacing and column sigs aren’t always consistent. Everything about the essentials of layout should be standardized to maintain consistency.


Runner-up
The ObserverBroward Community College
Looking at its clean interior design and extensiveness of coverage, you’d think The Observer at
Broward Community College had a good-sized staff. You’d be wrong. The twice-monthly, non-standard broadsheet is written and produced by just four editors and eight writers. That wouldn’t be amazing if this were a small newsletter covering one campus, but The Observer covers the news at all four BCC campuses in addition to regular sports, entertainment, career, and opinions sections. “My staff is very concerned with covering all of the campuses to make sure this is a college-wide newspaper,” says Lynne Farber, advisor.

The Observer’s most unique aspect is its “Career” section. In each issue, the page highlights one specific career, everything from journalism to computer science. With community college readers who may not know exactly what their future career plans are, the profiles, interviews, and articles seem especially apropos. “The staff really thought about what the other students’ needs are, and they really worked hard to meet those needs,” Farber says.

The Observer uses its limited color to the best of its ability by featuring a “double-truck” in every issue. Although everything from sports previews to board of trustee profiles appear in the center-spread, the space is usually reserved for the “Entertainment” section. Colorful music and movie photos draw readers into reviews that, although not exceptional, are adequate enough to entertain students between classes. “Our purpose is to give the BCC students and staff a paper that deals with a variety of issues, particularly since our school consists of such a diverse group,” says Fritz Loriston, editor in chief. “From that standpoint, I’d say we’re meeting that purpose.”

Where The Observer needs the most work is on its front page. The “flag” is in desperate need of a redesign. A more elegant font, logo, and layout would give the paper more curb appeal. Also, the sidebar running the length of the page needs to be scrapped or completely overhauled. Right now, the amount of wasted space and the seemingly random choices in font, font size, and photo placement is painful to look at. “This staff wants to freshen the way the front page looks by the end of the term,” Farber says. “If they get the other 19 pages better, the cover will come.”

Contact Farber at lfarber@broward.edu, or Loriston at news_observer@hotmail.com.

Tips for Improvement—The Observer

  1. Improve the designThe sidebar on the front page is a sore spot. It wastes too much space. Tighten it up.
  2. Include contact infoConsider running e-mail addresses with the individual articles—either in the byline or as a tag at the end of the story. They will promote reader interaction with the paper.
  3. Maintain modular designFar too often ads, photos, and other stories cut into articles in awkward ways.


Honorable Mention
In Motion
Daytona Beach Community College
Nipping closely at the heels of The Observer is
Daytona Beach Community College’s In Motion. Actually, in many ways, In Motion is better than its competition. The front page is attractive and well-designed; the interior pages maintain a balance between art, photos, and text; and the paper even offers colorful and interesting photo stories on the center spread. On the whole, In Motion has a number of excellent components. “We get a lot of compliments from both faculty and students,” says Elena Jarvis, advisor. “We notice more students getting involved with activities on campus as they read about them.”

However, the paper falls dreadfully short when it comes to the extensiveness of its coverage. Not only is the news section lacking content, but the paper is missing the in-depth, heavily-reported news features that can make a monthly publication worth reading. Where are the articles on student credit-card debt or Student Government waste that can have an impact on campus? Where is the three-piece series on students and religion or battling stereotypes that can establish personal connections with readers? With In Motion’s already solid foundation, adding some in-depth articles will go a long way toward building the paper to one of the best in the state.

Contact Jarvis at jarvise@dbcc.edu, or visit www.dbcc.cc.fl.us/inmotion/Inmotion.htm.

Tips for Improvement—In Motion

  1. Proof the issue before pressWe noticed articles without bylines, spacing problems, and numerous grammar and AP mistakes. Copy edit the issue much closer before it goes to press.
  2. Improve the News sectionNew is a weakness right now. Since the paper seems to have a firm grasp on features, consider writing more of a news/feature hybrid. Take current trends or national stories and localize them to interest the students.
  3. Expand Editorial sectionSmaller papers should rely more on the Editorial section to promote reader involvement. Consider expanding the section to two pages and consistently having four or five articles.


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